I was walking up some stairs in a building
Inside parts of the building were new
but no one lived there anymore
I passed a lucky fox head on the stairs—
But fox, where are your ears and your eyes and your tongue?
where is your body, your bushy tail?
The head slunk past without stopping
If a fox crosses your path, an opportunity will be given you
so I followed it through the building to the roof
where the sky
and a woman lay dying
"I used to have a garden," she said
If a fox stops and looks at you, your ambitions will be fulfilled
She took out her eyes and her tongue
and placed these in my hand
She took a fox tail from under her skirts
and fastened it to my spine
where it had forked
she joined the pieces
She ran her fingers over my ears
and they tickled like fur
When I looked up she didn't have any ears
any eyes
any tongue
any tail
The head sat there
vacant in my direction
I put the fox eyes to my eyes
and I could see across the sea
I put the tongue in my pocket
and picked my way down the stairs unseen
following the smell of tide
Abigail Chabitnoy’s dreamscape of a poem depicts a coy little fox.
- What moods does this poem take you through?
- What do you think the setting of this poem is?
- How does having some lines in italics affect your perception of the narrator?
- What do you think the purpose of repeating “eyes,” “tongue,” and “tail” is?
- With the lack of any periods, how does this affect your reading?
Writing Activity
Try your hand at writing your own poem in the frame of a dream, featuring an animal guiding the narrator.
Useful Links
- Interview with Abigail Chabitnoy: https://cah.ucf.edu/floridareview/article/interview-abigail-chabitnoy/
- Interview with writing prompts from Abigail: https://native-voices.com/blog/abigail-chabitnoy/